Automobile First Aid Kits

In order to finish my English credit I need to wirte the following sentences in good form. I suck in grammer because I am not very good with English! Please help me out!!!!!!!!! The instruction was: Add or delete commas to clarify the following sentences:

1.Once Carl a friend of mine was a passenger in a car involved in a collision.

2.By the way, Carl drives no one would ever guess how nervous he was in driver's education class.

3.To pass the written exam Carl studied every night.

4.The instructor Mr. Hughes asked Carl, to be the first driver to take the road test.

5. "You're prepared Carl" Mr. Hughes said. "Don't worry. Just drive defensively."

6.After buckling his seat belt, and adjusting the rearview mirror Carl started the car's ignition.

7.His palms were sweaty and he felt sick to his stomach.

Directions: Insert commas to clarify sentences as needed, and revise sentence that contain comma splices.

8.Some people enjoy the speed of air travel; others the independence of car travel.

9.A long automobile trip not just air or rail travel requires a lot of advanced planning.

10.With a good plan and a well-maintained car road trips can offer a great way to see the nation.

11.Motorists should be prepared for anything that can go wrong probably will.

12.Any road traveler will tell you that preparation is key; patience vital.

13.Before hitting the road travelers should check that their tires are in good condition and their turn signals in working order.

14.Always keep a good map, a gasoline can, and a blanket in your car when you travel, having a first-aid kit, a snack, and water in the car is a good idea, too.

Directions: Insert commas as needed to clarify the following sentences.

15."Women have been in the driver's seat since cars gained popularity in the late 1800's" the noted lecturer began.

16. She continued "An adventurer named Alice Huyler Ramsey founded the first United States Women's Motoring Club."

17.I soon discovered that Alice Ramsey club president organized an auto race exclusively for women.

18. With New York as the starting point, the race began on January 12 1909.

19."The racers traveled in pairs" reported the local papers "and drove fine automobiles."

20.The exhausted winners reached the finish line in Pennsylvania two days later on January 14 1909.

1.Once, Carl, a friend of mine, was a passenger in a car involved in a collision.

2.By the way Carl drives, no one would ever guess how nervous he was in driver's education class.

3.To pass the written exam, Carl studied every night.

4.The instructor, Mr. Hughes, asked Carl to be the first driver to take the road test.

5. "You're prepared, Carl" Mr. Hughes said. "Don't worry. Just drive defensively."

6.After buckling his seat belt, and adjusting the rearview mirror, Carl started the car's ignition.

7.His palms were sweaty and he felt sick to his stomach.

8.Some people enjoy the speed of air travel; others the independence of car travel.

9.A long automobile trip; not just air or rail travel; requires a lot of advanced planning.

10.With a good plan and a well-maintained car, road trips can offer a great way to see the nation.

11.Motorists should be prepared for anything that can go wrong, probably will.

12.Any road traveler will tell you that preparation is key; patience vital.

13.Before hitting the road, travelers should check that their tires are in good condition; and their turn signals in working order.

14.Always keep a good map, a gasoline can, and a blanket in your car when you travel; having a first-aid kit, a snack, and water in the car is a good idea too.

15."Women have been in the driver's seat since cars gained popularity in the late 1800's," the noted lecturer began.

16. She continued, "An adventurer named Alice Huyler Ramsey founded the first United States Women's Motoring Club."

17.I soon discovered that Alice Ramsey, club president, organized an auto race exclusively for women.

18. With New York as the starting point, the race began on January 12 1909.

19."The racers traveled in pairs," reported the local papers, "and drove fine automobiles."

20.The exhausted winners reached the finish line in Pennsylvania two days later on January 14 1909.

2010-03-18 08:59:58 by clueless92

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