First Aid For Cs

Monday. The first day of the week, nobody likes them unless they’re in the holidays. Unfortunately today wasn’t a holiday. After twenty precious minutes of snoozing, I got out of bed and made my way down stairs. It was 7:30. Great, I was already late for work. I grabbed yesterdays jeans from the wash basket and threw on my favourite red top, I guess I looked acceptable. As I waded into the kitchen the aroma of black coffee wafted around. Black coffee only meant one thing- Danni was here. Danni was the trainee I looked after 24/7. She lived in the basement of our block of flats but hung around mostly in my domain.
“You need to hurry up Scar. At the rate you’re moving we aren’t likely to get to work before Christmas”
“Let me get my keys and we’ll be off, okay?”
Danni sighed in response, I had to give her a lift into work each morning and so far she had already been told off every day for the last few weeks. I knew she was scared of getting the sack but Thomas would never even consider getting rid of her. Danni not only was an excellent detective but also knew first aid and forensics. Shame I can’t say the same for me.
After five minutes of routing through my black suede handbag I found my keys, as always they were right at the bottom. Me and Danni walked out my flat together and hopped into my mini. We talked briefly about the weekend but most of the drive down town was silent. This was fine with me, my conversation skills don’t usually kick in till gone nine in the mornings. As soon as I got through the door of HQ I was dragged into Detective Thomas’ office. I expected the usual ‘your late rant’ but surprisingly I didn’t receive it
“Good morning Scarlett” Thomas smiled warmly at me but did not offer me a seat which usually means I’ll be heading off someplace. As he rambled on about the weather I observed his outfit, today he was wearing a striped suit with a red tie which read ‘I’m innocent’- how ironic.
“Did you want something sir?” I asked with all the pleasantness I could muster.
“Actually I did. There’s been a shoot up at 74 Asylum Street, I want you and Danni to head down there and take a look at the scene of crime and see what sort of forensics they’ve got so far”
“Right” Like always if anyone was killed it would be me who was sent to find the criminal. I was the only CID detective in our little town.
“Oh and Scarlett, this is not a.....not a usual murder. I think you’ll find it different from the others.” Thomas warned me.
I muttered ‘thanks’ and then exited through one of the many doors in his office. After explaining the situation to Danni we both went off to gather up our various pieces of equipment. In my briefcase I took all my usual items; notebook, gloves, bags, handcuffs, CS spray, radios and finally but just as pre-caution my hand gun. So far I’ve never had to use it and hopefully it will stay that way...but it’s better to be safe than sorry.
I met Danni at reception as we arranged then grabbed the keys for the employees van. Asylum Street was rough and my car was new, I didn’t want it getting vandalised as it had been before.


English homework-start of my detective story. Im 13, what do you think ?
I have used paragraphed this but i copid and pasted straight from word and the spaces arn't showing- sorry.

Pretty good. I saw a few typos and an incorrectly used word here and there but nothing you can't fix on the next rewrite. I have to wonder how long this story has to be, because if it's a short story you don't have time for the details you gave above. If it's novel or novella length, then you're fine, but if it's meant to be a short story you need to begin where the above piece ends; getting right into the meat of the story.

2010-02-03 09:16:25 by

USMLE CS 2 Clinical Skills & prep for CK2 Case study Practice test Key Questions Website sites.google.com

OBJECTIVE:
Seeking a position as an Armed Security Guard

SKILLS AND QULIFICATIONS
•Two years of experience providing security as a corrections officer and two years experience as an Army infantry- mortar man.
•Secret security clearance
•Ability to make quick and prompt decisions in emergency situations.
•Knowledgeable about the latest practices and procedures in the field of security.
•Sharp shooter
•Extensive training and certifications in all areas of security and combat.

EXPERIENCE

US Army National Guard, Charlottesville, VA 05/2008 – Present
Security Guard
•Efficiently employ crew and individual weapons in offensive, defensive and retrograde ground combat
•Excellent aptitude for performing hand-to-hand combat involving martial-arts tactics
•Adept at carrying out scouting missions
•Proficiency operating two-way radios and signal equipment to relay battle orders
•Sound knowledge mortar ballistic computer operation
•Ability maintain and operate crew serviced mortar systems
•Continued efforts to maintain and improve proficiency in small arms
•Safely and effectively operate military vehicles
•Trained with the knowledge to perform first responder medical assistance for combat casualties

VA Department of Correction, Fluvanna, VA 07/2008 – Present
Security Guard
•Remarkable ability to maintain discipline and incur the same in others.
•Extensive use of well-honed verbal and listening skills to determine potential inmate problems.
•Accomplished verbal skills used to inform with clarity and precision institutional rules to the new inmates.
•Attentively monitor visits between inmates and personal visitors and periods of recreational activity
•Preformed searches for inmates and their cells regularly for confiscated materials.
•Effectively maintain peace and order within facility
•Superior skills in preparing and maintaining routine records and logs sheets and also update the requisite data regularly.
•Meticulously monitor surveillance equipment and perform routine patrols
•Safely transporting inmates
•Paramount proficiency in firearms, less than lethal weapons and restraints


Charlottesville Glass and Mirror 04/2003 – 05/2008
•Performed pattern work for glass table tops and other areas
•Maintained and ran in-line and shape beveller, in-line polishers
•Operated forklift
•Performed commercial and residential installation
•Performed aluminum fabrication
•Manufactured insulated glass
•Decorative sandblasting
•Customer service


Disabled American Veterans 01/2001 – 06/2002
Driver
•Picked up furniture and other types of donations
•Provided customer service, answering questions
•Negotiated prices
•Sterilized upholstery
•Priced furniture and electronics


EDUCATION

Lynchburg Christian Academy, Lynchburg, VA Graduate
Central Virginia Community College General Studies
Liberty University General Studies

CURRENT CERTIFICATIONS
CPR and First Aid
Combat Life Saver
Level One Combatives
FEMA Introduction to Incident Command System
FEMA Introduction to National Incident Management System
Virginia Corrections Officer Certification

WEAPON CERTIFICATIONS
38 revolver
12-gauge shotgun
AR15
M16
50 Caliber Machine Gun
249- Squad Automatic Weapon
Mark19 and M203 Grenade Launcher
Fragmentation and Smoke grenade
Stinger, OC, and CS Grenade
Less Than Lethal Ammunition
40mm Gas Gun
NOVA Stun Shield
Manadnock Baton
Five Point Restraints
And if anyone would be willing to copy- edit- and repost in the answers to "show" what you think would look better for a security resume... Please do. This resume is supposed to be geared for private and government security.
So with the input given would this be better?

OBJECTIVE:
Seeking a position as an Armed Security Guard

SKILLS AND QULIFICATIONS
• Two years of experience providing security as a corrections officer and two years experience as an Army infantry- mortar man.
• Secret security clearance
• Ability to make quick and prompt decisions in emergency situations.
• Knowledgeable about the latest practices and procedures in the field of security.
• Sharp shooter
• Extensive training and certifications in all areas of security and combat.
• Excellent aptitude for performing hand-to-hand combat involving martial-arts tactics
• Remarkable ability to maintain discipline and incur the same in others.
• Superior skills in preparing and maintaining routine records and logs sheets and also update the requisite data regularly.
• Paramount proficiency in firearms, less than lethal weapons and restraints
• Extensive use of well-honed verbal and listening skills to determine potential problems.

EXPERIENCE
US Army National Guard, Charlottesville, VA 05/2008 – Present
Security Guard
• Efficiently employ crew and individual weapons in offensive, defensive and retrograde ground combat
• Adept at carrying out scouting missions
• Proficiency operating two-way radios and signal equipment to relay battle orders
• Sound knowledge mortar ballistic computer operation
• Ability maintain and operate crew serviced mortar systems
• Continued efforts to maintain and improve proficiency in small arms
• Safely and effectively operate military vehicles
• Trained with the knowledge to perform first responder medical assistance for combat casualties

VA Department of Correction, Fluvanna, VA 07/2008 – Present
Security Guard
• Accomplished verbal skills used to inform with clarity and precision institutional rules to the new inmates.
• Attentively monitor visits between inmates and personal visitors and periods of recreational activity
• Preformed searches for inmates and their cells regularly for confiscate
materials.
• Effectively maintain peace and order within facility
• Meticulously monitor surveillance equipment and perform routine patrols
• Safely transporting inmates


Charlottesville Glass and Mirror 04/2003 – 05/2008
Shop Technician


Disabled American Veterans 01/2001 – 06/2002
Driver

EDUCATION

Lynchburg Christian Academy, Lynchburg, VA Graduate
Central Virginia Community College General Studies
Liberty University General Studies

CURRENT CERTIFICATIONS
CPR and First Aid
Combat Life Saver
Level One Combatives
FEMA Introduction to Incident Command System
FEMA Introduction to National Incident Management System
Virginia Corrections Officer Certification
(Extensive list of weapon certifications)

I would list the pertinent skills in the skill (qualifications) section, starting with the qualities that you want to set you apart, such as leadership, good decision making skills, organized, etc... This first section will expand...

Then remove the skills/abilities/accomplishments listed in the job history section, especially the "non-applicable" ones, such as sterilized upholstery, performed framework, etc... leaving just employer name, dates, titles.

I would also remove the weapons certifications, the ability to use an M16 & M203 will not apply domestically, just a thought.

2010-07-29 15:56:14 by

Price: $45.95

I dont know whether I should go to a junior college first and then transfer to a a UC or CS because I dont have the money to go straight into a 4 year immediately, I have the grades but money is the concern and I am aware of financial aid. Also what are some schools in California that are known for their engineering or sciences because I want to pursue a career in the technological field being a software engineer

No it is not the same at all. It's a waste of time and money on your part. Most colleges and/or universities will not accept all the credits from a junior college. That is something you would have to check on.

2011-10-01 11:03:13 by BLAH BLAH

Price: $44.95

It's a familiar tactic with this crew:

* In 2001, with escalating concerns about possible attacks on our information technology infrastructure, Bush named a "cybersecurity czar."

* In 2003, the president's desire to help his corporate benefactors led to the creation of a "regulatory czar" at the Office of Management and Budget. Around the same time, Bush named his first "AIDS Czar." (He didn't choose wisely -- Bush tapped Randall Tobias, the administration's former top advocate of global abstinence-only policies, who was recently forced to resign after procuring "massages" from a controversial Washington escort service.)

* In 2004, faced with growing discontent over the nation's struggling manufacturing industries, Bush appointed a "manufacturing czar." (He chose the chief executive of a Nebraska company that had laid off manufacturing employees and built factories in China.)

* 2005 was a banner year for czars. In February, Bush responded to revelations about failed national security intelligence by creating an "intelligence czar." Shortly thereafter, we had a "bird-flu czar." A few months after that, following the tragically botched handling of the response to Hurricane Katrina, there was a "Katrina czar."

http://www.prospect.org/cs/articles?arti cle=wish_upon_a_czar

Ok - Bad Bush. BAD BAD BAD!!

Well, Obama is WORSE
He is appointing MORE czars, without them being vetted properly.
And his czars are WAY more contreversial than Bush's czars!
Van Jones is not only a 9/11 truther, but a self-avowed communist! Are you OK with that?

2009-09-08 09:28:29 by gitrdoneobama

* In 2001, with escalating concerns about possible attacks on our information technology infrastructure, Bush named a "cybersecurity czar."

* In 2003, the president's desire to help his corporate benefactors led to the creation of a "regulatory czar" at the Office of Management and Budget. Around the same time, Bush named his first "AIDS Czar." (He didn't choose wisely -- Bush tapped Randall Tobias, the administration's former top advocate of global abstinence-only policies, who was recently forced to resign after procuring "massages" from a controversial Washington escort service.)

* In 2004, faced with growing discontent over the nation's struggling manufacturing industries, Bush appointed a "manufacturing czar." (He chose the chief executive of a Nebraska company that had laid off manufacturing employees and built factories in China.)

* 2005 was a banner year for czars. In February, Bush responded to revelations about failed national security intelligence by creating an "intelligence czar." Shortly thereafter, we had a "bird-flu czar." A few months after that, following the tragically botched handling of the response to Hurricane Katrina, there was a "Katrina czar."

It's become a common enough strategy to become the butt of jokes. Newsweek satirist Andy Borowitz recently suggested that the White House needs a "lying czar" to "oversee all distortions and misrepresentations."

http://www.prospect.org/cs/articles?arti cle=wish_upon_a_czar

I can recognize that Bush had 4 Czars if you can recognize that Obama has 45.

2009-08-28 14:08:05 by gitrdoneobama